whatever it was they called her,
it meant she was crazy.
summer youd see her like clockwork,
dressed always just the same,
packmule-pacing curling street
(all of it)
and stopping every dozenorso lead
steps,stomping her shitkickers,
sad ox eyes tied up behind her as though
someone was following,always
a look on her drawn,
wan face of
hope that it might be the case.
today in the diamond dead of winter,
tractor's jinglebell chains
jolly up the blacktop,
bonedry in the frostbit sun
as it piles snow,
proud as a redfaced child,
precariously close to the
jokes of walls that
almost-enclose me
and slides blind out
into the street at whims
to almost kiss the noses
in the little toytruck
flock.
like clockwork
there she is scarved
stomping her shitkickers
to the centre of her street
and wagging the trucks
through with her empty hands
like herding sheep,
natural as anything.
March 1, 2008...11:46 pm
transit notes,having attempted to adjust a watch which after all was not there
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8 Comments
March 2, 2008 at 2:24 am
Hi darren I really like this one !!!!!!! a+ gold star ten dogs
March 2, 2008 at 3:20 am
god this one is so good $$$$$$
March 3, 2008 at 7:18 pm
Hey, this turned out really well.
March 4, 2008 at 2:17 pm
Darren great job! I like this one (:
March 4, 2008 at 11:01 pm
what am i gonna do with all these dogs
March 4, 2008 at 11:02 pm
thanks to tim and alison for editorial insight
March 8, 2008 at 11:55 pm
darren, i am pretty envious of the stuff you are writing, man
in the best way possible :)
March 20, 2008 at 7:21 pm
Yes. Amazing.